Remember those instructions on changing a flat tire from Paragraph assignment 4, the ones you wrote in paragraph form and then edited? Go back through the first draft you turned in and edit it once more, taking out one or more words from virtually every single sentence in the entire document (90% of the sentences in the original, or more). Bear down on concision. Cut all you can without losing any of the important meaning: be ruthless!

Save the original first draft and your newly edited version in a single Word document and post it to the Editing exercise 3 dropbox.